the dude person
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Re: A Sample of a SW Fan Fic by the Dude Person (PLEASE READ THIS! AND COMMENT!)
THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH!
that's got to have been the best comment I've gotten yet.
I'm glad you like it, I'll have more on the way by this weekend... I'll be slowly revealing pieces of Kyrr Geron's past from time to time, and you guys (the readers) will sort of have to fit the pieces of the puzzle together. Also, I'll start picking up the pace of the action, and there will be more of a "bigger picture" in subsequent chapters, as in more important stuff will happen. I've decided that this story will be seen only from Kyrr's point of view, unlike real SW novels (and the movies) which have several sub-plots that they cut to back and forth... I mean like in ROTS, they switch back and forth between Anakin vs Obi-wan and Yoda vs Sidious, and stuff like that...I figure non-star wars novels get by without multiple subplots to follow just fine.
I liked the character and the story.
I felt a bit of a noir atmosphere to it, which I really enjoyed.
THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH!
that's got to have been the best comment I've gotten yet.
I'm glad you like it, I'll have more on the way by this weekend... I'll be slowly revealing pieces of Kyrr Geron's past from time to time, and you guys (the readers) will sort of have to fit the pieces of the puzzle together. Also, I'll start picking up the pace of the action, and there will be more of a "bigger picture" in subsequent chapters, as in more important stuff will happen. I've decided that this story will be seen only from Kyrr's point of view, unlike real SW novels (and the movies) which have several sub-plots that they cut to back and forth... I mean like in ROTS, they switch back and forth between Anakin vs Obi-wan and Yoda vs Sidious, and stuff like that...I figure non-star wars novels get by without multiple subplots to follow just fine.